haiku | december 6

isolated cause

gathering neuroses

to pay damages

8 responses to “haiku | december 6”

  1. roofgardenkincaid Avatar
    roofgardenkincaid

    Wow, I don’t think I’ve ever read a traumatic haiku before. Painful like ice. Amazing poem. 😳

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    1. anne Avatar
      anne

      Thank you so much! I’m going through something deeply awful right now, so I’m glad some of that came through 🙏🌺

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      1. merlinspielen Avatar
        merlinspielen

        Sorry to hear that Anne – writing for me was an anchor during the storms of my own despair.

        Well crafted senryū verse.

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      2. anne Avatar
        anne

        Thank you 🙏🌺

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      3. roofgardenkincaid Avatar
        roofgardenkincaid

        I’m sorry to hear it’s not going well for you. I hope your Haiku poems and photography are helping you in a way that is cathartic. I also hope things get better for you. Be good to yourself, Anne. The world needs your art. 🙌🏻❤︎

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      4. anne Avatar
        anne

        Thank you 🙏💜 yes, poetry always helps ☺️

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  2. Valerie Avatar
    Valerie

    Writing always got me through the hardest parts in my life, when everyone left it was my journal that held all of my pain. Lovely poem 💫🌹

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    1. anne Avatar
      anne

      Thank you 🙏🌺 Being able to express feelings with words really is a gift 💜

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